Raindrops and Tears
This follows on from Tony's story, Breaking Free, although you will understand the story without reading that first. I've updated parts one and two and retaken most of the screenshots, because let's face it, they were crap. Jasmine will get a happy ending - eventually - because I'm not that cruel 😉 Currently there are plans for a chapter 6 and 7, then maybe a short epilogue of what-happened-after.
Sorry, I don't know when I'm going to finish this. I really feel like this needs a total rewrite. Jasmine has a lot of problematic behaviours that are badly addressed, and they really should be fixed first. If you read this, bear in mind I wrote this in 2006 and it hasn't aged well.
Trigger warning
Part One - Minor update August 2013
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(71 pages)
Part Two - Partially reshot and updated August 2013
For Llyriel, thanks for enjoying it so much 🙂
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(113 pages)
Part Three - Minor update August 2013
For AnniKayna, sorry for keeping you waiting so long - hope you are not disappointed
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(75 pages)
Part Four - Minor update August 2013
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(58 pages)
Part Five - Updated and partially reshot August 2013
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(66 pages)